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You will receive

• A written review of your work that will allow you to make significant revisions.

• Recommendations for ways to strengthen and improve the text and flow of your story.


SKU: 0006
  • If you prefer to begin with a Critique, I will offer advice for modifying your manuscript to make it understandable to your target audience.

    I will offer suggestions for giving the story more meaning through fewer words and the right amount of forward movement. I will also offer constructive assistance with rhyme scheme and meter.

    In addition, I will evaluate:

    • the language and vocabulary, keeping in mind the way children process information.

    • the strength of your main character.

    • the story arc, making sure the story has a meaningful beginning, middle and end.

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