You will receive
• A written review of your work that will allow you to make significant revisions.
• Recommendations for ways to strengthen and improve the text and flow of your story.
Critique
SKU: 0006
$100.00Price
If you prefer to begin with a Critique, I will offer advice for modifying your manuscript to make it understandable to your target audience.
I will offer suggestions for giving the story more meaning through fewer words and the right amount of forward movement. I will also offer constructive assistance with rhyme scheme and meter.
In addition, I will evaluate:
• the language and vocabulary, keeping in mind the way children process information.
• the strength of your main character.
• the story arc, making sure the story has a meaningful beginning, middle and end.